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Per request, a poem by klakla


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now lemme just say i'm not a huge fan of poetry buuuuuut i wrote this poem a while ago and i enjoy its existence. all kinds of critique are welcome! i'll prolly post something longer later, but this is just for now.

 

i’ve heard this song many times before

i know every word

every syllable inside every word

every tone inside every syllable

as they slip off his slurring mouth

and drip onto the microphone

clumsily staggering about

in a drunken state

they’ve got a sense of beauty in their motion,

just enough to

fade

into

and blacker than ink

they dance together in a waltz.

 

i know every beat, every note

birthed by the instruments

hanging in the air, screaming like fireworks

brighter than the sun

and ill feel them as they choke down my throat

scratching my lungs as they travel deep

down into my heart where they matter most

where ill keep them

and ill remember them when i hear this song again.

 

- amanda c.

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Klaud,

 

Wow. That was awesome. Great job. I'm surprised you don't like poetry...you are very talented.

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amg! i have poems you emailed me like...a LONG time ago.. kekek

 

i just reread them and they're amazing =P

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Two things I like. Good poetry and music. Good poetry about music is perfect. It makes me want to sing to somebody right now...just need to find someone to sing to. lol!

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I hate you Amanda! I have been trying to write a poem about music for soo long now..... and you make it look... sooooo simple.

 

I love thee

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