If There Were Words

This is a poem I wrote when I was in high school. It is still one of the few accomplishments in life that I am most proud of, since it made the semi-finals of a semi-national poetry contest and was published.

 

 

If There Were Wordes

 

 

If there were words to tell you

just how much I care,

The list would be unending,

as it streatched high through the air.

 

If there were ways to show you

exactly how I feel,

No actions could come close,

no matter what the deal.

 

If there were gifts to give you

that could please your lovely eyes,

I'd buy a million dozen roses,

and bring forth with them the night's skies.

 

If there were ways of stopping

this wishing you were mine,

To hold your body would be bliss,

to kiss your lips, devine.

 

If there were words to tell you

that all of this is true,

Those words would be quite simple.

They would be "I love you."

hehe i liked that, it made me feel warm inside.

 

*resists urge to taint thread with emo poems* x_x

good job Jason, its a very nice poem.

Aww... that's so nice. A poem that is both beautiful of itself, and the meaning it coveys.

 

Cudos, my friend, that is something hard to accomplish, espcially in the english language, where rhymes often become stale.

 

 

As a note, if I couldn't use google as spellchecker, beautiful would have been spent beuitful in that sentence.

Thank you very much! I look forward to showing everyone more of my works in the future.

 

Your compliment was very well-spoken, btw siegeman. I am honored. I look forward to more feedback from other members in the future.

Jason,

That was very sweet and well written. Nice job!

 

Alec

Well written love poem...good ryhme scheme. Wonderful job.

 

Maybe sometime I will post some of my crack-pot poems, a few of which were published and won some awards even though I think the teachers were high when they were reading them. lol

 

Jason...keep up the good work.